Digital reflection 3

In the second digital art lesson, we did a peer crit of our photo-bashing, according to points on a peer-crit document, the 'Crit Script'. Some of the major points that I received was that I had used good shape language to portray the function of the robot well, such as the use of sharp shapes to indicate a threat. However, there were points for me to improve, such as the silhouette of the legs, which were in slightly the wrong place, and some issues with shadowing, as well as needing to bring the viewer's eye around the robot with the use of colour and panel break-up. These are points that I will use when improving my photo-bash, alongside using industry work as inspiration and to compare my work against.